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To the horizon,
You are sailing,
All the while,
You are failing,
What you want,
A place to rest,
Unlike now,
You are oppressed.

All boundaries,
Have been crossed,
So look around,
You are lost,
Gone astray,
Led by fears,
Cast away,
To the years.

At home,
With family,
It is there,
You cannot be,
All freedom,
They take away,
As your life,
Is their prey.

You live now,
A silent confession,
Of true beauty,
Cast into depression,
Still there is a way,
Out of this hell,
So unto darkness,
Do not dwell.

Be yourself,
And come with me,
So that you may,
Be set free,
I have found,
Why you are afraid,
But a new future,
Shall be made.

I will not judge,
What you do,
I will love the person,
Inside of you,
And we shall not,
Be led astray,
Because this love,
Is here to stay.

Wipe away,
All those tears,
And ignore,
All your fears,
There is nothing,
I wonít do,
If I am not,
There with you.

If Iím lost,
And canít be found,
It wonít last,
Things change around,
I will be back,
Here for you,
I will come back,
Thatís what Ill do.

When all is odd,
And you break,
When you know,
Itís all you can take,
Do not worry,
For you are blessed,
In my arms,
You can always rest.

I have true love,
In my heart,
Even when pain,
Tears me apart,
I love the spirit,
That you hide,
I love the person,
You keep inside.

Itís no secret,
The reason why,
I never want,
To say goodbye,
You alone,
Make my spirits soar,
So love and be loved,
Forevermore.
This poem has gone through so many changes, and different stages. I am happy to present the current, well tuned, and finely polished version of Forevermore.
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wildheartfreesoul Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2006  Professional General Artist
i cant believe i never commented on this poem.


actually, i can...i cant thnk of anything to say. its just beautiful... kinda makes me choke up now though...
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Andilwen-Illiana Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2005   Writer
Hear hear!
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XxAphroditesAngelxX Featured By Owner May 10, 2005
wow Maxx.. nothing I can say could express how well you wrote this poem.. or how much it touched me (and everyone else as has become apparent).. or how much emotion you obviously put into it.. or how happy I am for both you and Leah.. you're obviously both very lucky to have eachother..

but basically.. wow Maxx.. you truelly out-did yourself.. I'm speechless..

The best you've ever written by far.. although I'm sure that even better will come..
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Dead-Godess Featured By Owner May 5, 2005
This poem as been bless by True Talent.
congratulations. it's great.



~Dead-Godess~cuz' nobody ever survives~
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blackrose001 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2005   Writer
that sounds exactly like me, the person taht hides who they are
beautiful!
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Loganzw Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2005
this applies to me right now.. it makes me sad, yet gives me hope.. your an awsome writer.. :+fav:
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VonKalkmann Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2005
How does it apply? And have hope, if you have hope it makes it easier to hold on, and when you hold on long enough then things are bound to change for the better.
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Loganzw Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2005
yes.. i have hope, but some of it donset go right together... but it is easier to hold on true. The Part about i'll not judge you for what you've done.... and so on. Thats my favorite part.
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VonKalkmann Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2005
I know it might be kindof odd because I dont know you, but if you want to talk about what happened, I may be able to offer advice or help console you and keep you hopeful. Ive been through plenty of stuff, and Im here to help, or at least try to, if you want. And you dont have to give me any names or anything, you could just say whats going on, and leave it at that. Just note me if you feel like talking.
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renia-vandolrin Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2005   Photographer
Thats brillant! Its an added fav!! Excellent job on it, I think its absolutely perfect :!:
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